walkingsleep
March 21, 2007 @ 2:41 am
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In My Shoes, Walking Sleep. In my Youth I Pray to Keep -

First Impression:[5/5] - Love the song that your title comes from. An interesting layout.

Navigation:[9/10] - A little bit jumbled, but easy to use and easy to read. I got a little lost looking for your link, but that could have been my fault, since this is my first review in over a year(I think).

Content:[20/25] - I started on July 12th, 2006 and ready pretty much everything from there until your latest entry. I was going to read your prologue as well, but I couldn't get to it. I did read your introduction. My husband would be so jealous to know you got to see Alice in Chains. He LOVES them. I was a little confused at first, so I went and started looking at your links, and after I read the Cast page, it all fell into place and made so much more sense to me. Congrats on running up five flights of stairs, I'd probably pass out if I tried. I feel the same way that you do about those "Make your ding dog bigger in 24 hours" emails. They drive me nuts.

Your diary is pretty much updates of what's going on in your life. You show a little bit of emotion in your love for LOML. I absolutly love this entry. It really sums things up. It really is a lot harder than it looks to start thinking of yourself as one couple, rather than two people. After reading what I did from July and on, I decided to go back a little bit farther and try and get a better feel of you and I'm glad I did. I really enjoyed this and this.

I enjoyed your diary, because you show small bits of your heart, with out being sappy and you're funny without being a dork. I didn't like that some of your entries are contestless one liners and some are just lists.

Layout:[17/20] - Your layout is a little bit dark, yet it's not dark. I like it. I keep thinking "there should be some other way to arrange the links" but with your lay out I'm not sure that there is. I do wish that the Past // Random // Next part was up under your entry instead of down below your other links.

Contact:[10/10] - You have the required 3.

Extras:[4/5] - You have a cast, introduction, prologue, and a rings page. You also have a creativity link, but that was locked so I couldn't check it out.

Updates:[2/5] - A little crazy, no real pattern for updating.

Our Link: [10/10] - It's there, and it works!

Errors:[3/5] - Only that some of your links lead to a locked diary that I couldn't get to inorder to read some of your links. I also found some broken pictures.

Will I come back?[5/5] - Yes, I enjoyed it, I think I'll bookmark it and occasionally come back to check on you and LOML.

Creatvity Bonus [0/10] - I wish I could have got to your creativity link so that I could have given you the bonus.

Total:[85/100] -

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You've been reviewed by:DaniZ