nocry4help
October 28, 2003 @ 4:14 am
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nocry4helpFirst Impression: ooh! Emily Strange! Whee![5/5]
Navagation: Linkies, linkies, everywhere...mind boggling, really. But nicely placed, working, and the font is wonderfully readable - I do so hate a link I cannot read. [10/10]
Content: Wow, how very 'gothic' of you. Poetry, and sad poetry at that. Makes me miss my Morrissey shirt and ratty black skirt! Honestly, though, the poetry is good - promise me you wont post it at poetry.com, because they steal the rights to anything on their site. You ought to look into publishing, perhaps a zine or a small publishing company? Or maybe start a band and use the poems as lyrics. They would lend themselves to that well. You really push out a lot - I would like ot see some actually diary writing, but I love the poems too. I just think that some text would allow your reader to get to know you more. [30/30]
Layout: Like i said: "Oooh! Emily Strange! Whee!"[25/25]
Contact: Four options, right there on the left. [10/10]
Extras: I did mention the ubiquitous links, right? Riiiiiight.[10/10]
Errors: Errors? I don't see no steenkeeng errors![5/5]
Will I come back? I would, but I don't check even my budy list but once a month anymore. So no. But If I had more time to be online? Ohh yeah. You GOTH, you![5/5]
Creatvity Bonus: Hello? An original poem every entry? How much more creative can you GET?[5/5]
Total:[105/100]
Comments? Keep up the great work!
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