gbg
June 08, 2003 @ 9:23 pm
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Safety Words are for wusses

First Impression: Buffy? who is that?I really don't like her. So, I went into the entry. Not much help.[3/5]

Navagation:All on the bottom. Nice and easy.[10/10]

Content:I'm so sorry, but I couldn't get into your entries. They are so long, and so boring. You usually whine, fuss, babble, or rant. You don't express much emotion. You don't stuck to one thing. You go from one thing to another back to the first thing you were talking about. But the one entry that I read and kept me reading was this one [10/25]

Spelling and Grammar:Looks fine to me. [5/5]

Layout: Even tho I said I don't like buffy (please don't get mad at me) the pic is nice. Though I think that a dark background would look better, but whatever rocks your boat. I think is nice, and since you're a BIG buffy fan I think it goes with you. [13/15]

Updates:Whoa! Everyday. That's the way its supposed to be people. [10/10]

Contact: The usual three plus AIM, YIM, and ICQ. [10/10]

Extras: Links, Rings, rules, timeline, about me, fun stuff, cast and more.[10/10]

Errors:Didn't find any. [5/5]

Will I come back? No. Sorry [0/5]

Creatvity Bonus [/5]

Total:[76/100]

Comments? Ok look, as you know this is just my opinion. (you can always get a re-review)Here's what I think you should do. Go to Pieces Of You. They have a ton of topics there to write on, and "search within you" like they say. I heard that you have a couple of poems in there, I looked, but I couldn't find them, so I suggest making a page linking all your poems.

You've been reviewed by:Dulce